下面的一篇作文是一名高三学生练习:
这篇写作可以看出学生存在以下几个问题:
拼写方面:
1:单词拼写错误:tech(n)ology ,gover(n)ment,us(e)ful),
2:词性拼写错误 convenient(ly)
,3:单复数拼写错误 policys–policies
4:拼写不规范 article 的l 上面过长;
短语用错:
1:My hometown has taken (place) big changes in the last ten years.
本应该;
Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last ten years.
2:China government has come out many useful policies
本应该;China应该是 Chinese 。come out 也不能接宾语。当然本句子表达方式也不正确。
移行问题
单词移行一般注意几点;
1;单音节不允许移行
2;多音节词一般按音节移行
我的原则是;能不移行就不移行。
介词和连词问题
老师经常讲as和With的区别:
As做连词时要引导句子,with 做介词,它的结构一般是 With +宾语+补语;
下面的句子中的as 就用错了,该用with
1:As the development of technology,there is no denying that China is more powerful than ever before.
第二段中的with 就用对了;
with the global warming getting worse,—
so /such 不会区别
so +形容词/副词/动词/分词
such +名词/代词
such +不可数名词/可数名词复数
所以下面这个句子就错了:
I think my hometown has so big changes thanks to the power of China.
改成:
I think my hometown has such big changes thanks to the power of China.
表达不地道
I think my hometown has so big changes thanks to the power of China.China government has come out many useful policies which instruct people to make Chinese dream come true.
当然还有许多其他问题,这个学生不懂得及物动词和不及物动词问题;句子结构问题,移行问题,地道表达问题。
那么什么样的写作才算好呢?我们对比一下我班一名高二学生(这个学生在这次联考中全市总分第二名)的联考作文;
我感觉这篇文章给21分就有点少了,大家认为呢?好不好大家自己比较吧